One of my favorite photos
I like this
picture because my cat is sleeping peacefully (as it does most of the time) And
while she slept I told myself that I could put things on him without waking up,
So I was putting more and more things on them while she was still sleeping all
the time, she doesn’t care. I took its picture a very short time ago and I
really enjoyed it while I took it, my cat is very funny. I think the photo
portrays that moment when I laughed while she slept deeply. I always try to
take pictures of my cat be cause I find her very cute and funny.
Although I
do not usually take many photos in general, I forget the camera and that is why
I have few portraits of everyday life, I have but not as many as people in
general. And I think that for that is the photography, to portray moments that
we want to remember, and this photograph reminds me a moment when I laught a
lot, that's why it's my favorite photo.
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Lexis: Excellent use of lexical resources. 2/3
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Nota: 5,5
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